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Truly Alive

Time lost, moments missed
Words unsaid spill on paper
All that’s left is hope

Unshed tears, eyes red
Heartbroken, heavy with grief
Peace of mind, a dream

Music floods choked brain
Blending notes, playing havoc
Orchestrating pain

Life‘s rainbow hues glow
Painting laughter, joy, fears
Hope returns anew

Memories rush in
Eliminate solitude
Sunshine streams again

Soothing words, warm hugs
Wrap my mind, reassure me
My soul smiles with love

Motivation blooms
Happiness fills dark corners
Whispering, “have faith”

Nostalgic rain dance
Drenches hungry thoughts lazing
In the mind’s playground

Pink colored glasses
Make faded forgotten scenes
Come truly alive

This is a set of ten haikus for the prompt “Truly Alive”

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23 Comments

  1. sulekha sulekha

    My soul smiles on reading these lovely Haikus, beautiful post.

  2. Wow! What an awesome and inspiring, Truly Alive:)

  3. That was an innovative post, Vidya 🙂
    10 Haikus, 100 words – a very impressing way to collate thoughts coherently ! really good 🙂
    Cheers !

  4. Simply beautiful, Vidya!!
    You are so creative… 10 haikus in 100 words… super like! 🙂

  5. Kalpana Solsi Kalpana Solsi

    beautiful bouquet of haikus.

    Unshed tears, eyes red
    Heartbroken, heavy with grief
    Peace of mind, a dream

    This haiku takes the cake. beautiful.

  6. Each one had such a wonderful message attached. And the effect of every haiku was just as much 🙂

  7. Greetings human Vidya,

    Ah yes, I know of these haiku’s and you certainly have the wondrous gift.

    Dog’s call of nature
    Grass once green
    Yellows

    Pawsitive wishes,

    Penny the Jack Russell dog and modest internet superstar! 🙂

  8. Oh Penny, that was such lovely verse! I can just imagine cuddling you (yes, I am a big cuddler!)as we gaze across green fields swaying in the gentle breeze and pondering life. Hugs!

  9. 10 Haiku, 100 words… absolutely wonderfully crafted messages my dear Vidya 🙂 🙂

  10. Vidya Sury Vidya Sury Post author

    Thanks Sreeja. It was a last minute idea and I got caught up with it!

  11. Vidya Sury Vidya Sury Post author

    So nice to see you, Sulekha! Thanks!

  12. Vidya Sury Vidya Sury Post author

    I usually don’t get in that mood, Bhavya! Happy is my favorite state.

  13. Loved them all Vidya. But my fav is the memories rush in one !

  14. Vidya Sury Vidya Sury Post author

    🙂 Thanks Ruchira! Writing haiku is very addictive!

  15. preethi preethi

    I have not stepped next to a haiku yet!! so I am in total shock to see 10 of them in a row 🙂 loved your second one the best 🙂 each one is filled with beautiful emotions…great idea 🙂

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